From 7de4b10ce7dffe78fab40b55548dce7e195900e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BjornW Date: Mon, 6 Jan 2025 13:41:47 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Rephrased some of the sentences --- MarCom/One-pager.md | 16 +++++----------- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/MarCom/One-pager.md b/MarCom/One-pager.md index 6e08091..2b58848 100644 --- a/MarCom/One-pager.md +++ b/MarCom/One-pager.md @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ ## Introduction -Fediversity is an effort to bring easy-to-use, budget-conscious hosted -cloud services to individuals and institutions. We belief that digital +Fediversity is a project to bring easy-to-use, budget-conscious hosted +cloud services to organisations and individuals. We belief that digital autonomy is of paramount importance for our ability to innovate and adapt in a continuously changing world. @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ undermining our democracies. We need to free ourselves, our institutions, our companies, our societies and our economies from the claws of Bigtech. We need to regain our digital autonomy and with it, our ability to innovate and adapt. -With Fediversity, we want to contribute to this by offering you the +With Fediversity, we want to contribute to this, by offering you the means to free yourselves from the shackles of Bigtech. ## Our offer @@ -25,15 +25,9 @@ means to free yourselves from the shackles of Bigtech. Built upon the solid foundations of NixOS we offer blueprints to 'automagically' create, configure and maintain a set of interoperable open-source software application services. Using these blueprints, -individuals and service provider organisations are able to quickly offer -a compelling set of alternative services to the more well-known Bigtech -platform services. +we are able to quickly offer a compelling set of alternative services to the more well-known Bigtech platform services. -By virtue of the use of open standards, it is even possible to connect -our open-source based services with certain Bigtech offerings. Bringing -you the best of both worlds. It also provides you with the possibility -for bespoke solid substitutes and a tiered exit strategy to make a -deliberate decision to move away from Bigtech whenever you want. +By virtue of the use of open standards, it is possible to connect our open-source based services with certain Bigtech offerings. Combining the best of both worlds. Our offer provides options for bespoke solid substitutes, including the ability for a tiered exit strategy from Bigtech platforms whenever you want. Regaining your digital autonomy. ## Fediversity partners & funding